Audience Feedback

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In our feedback we had mixed reviews, some people liked it and not so much. Girls preferred the piece more than boys did so they could relate more but overall, most people said we need to work on the sound as it was very unstable and overwhelming at some points. We also had too many unnecessary clips of us walking so it was seen as 'boring' at some points.

Screening

Today I screened my thriller piece to various people, I got feedback on what went well and also constructive criticism. As it is only the first draft I will take into account what they have said and try and improve the thriller.

1st Draft

This is our thriller opening.
Media Studies (OCR)
AS Coursework G321
Robert Clack School 12127
Nadine Cole
Tayo Awosanya


 

Editing - Day 3

This is the last day of editing and now we are just running through the piece and touching up any few little imperfections we can. We have finally got out piece to just under 2 minutes, now we have applied a black and white filter it is ready to publish onto YouTube!

Editing - Day 2

Now we have made our title sequence on the end, we have our near finished version of our opening and we have also found our non - diegetic music and have put it throughout the piece so it's ongoing. We have also managed to cut our opening to 3 minutes which is also too long, we had extra time in our piece because our point of view shots were too long, we learnt that once the audience have established what we're trying to show (that I'm following someone) then that shot doesn't need to go on for any longer. We have also put the credits on the beginning of our opening and chose the font/size by using PicMonkey

Designing/ Making: Title Sequence

This is our title sequence for our thriller, the eye represents the eye the stalker (me) uses to stalk her victim (Tayo). The red colour represents the danger present in our piece and the font we used through PicMonkey looks as if blood has been used to draw the name so I am very happy with it and it foreshadows a lot that happens in the thriller opening.

Editing - Day 1

Today we have put all our clips onto Adobe Premiere Pro, we have all our clips put into chronological order. Next time, we have to create a title sequence for our thriller opening. Right now our piece is actually 5 minutes long and that is double the restricted time but in our next editing day we can cut all the unnecessary clips we included.